Monday, April 27, 2015

Writing Standards 6–12
3.
Write narratives to develop real or imagined experiences or events using
effective technique, well-chosen details, and well-structured event sequences.
 a.              Engage and orient the reader by setting out a problem, situation, or
observation, establishing one or multiple point(s) of view, and introducing a
narrator and/or characters; create a smooth progression of experiences or
events.
 b.              Use narrative techniques, such as dialogue, pacing, description, reflection,
and multiple plot lines, to develop experiences, events, and/or characters.
 c.              Use a variety of techniques to sequence events so that they build on one
another to create a coherent whole.
 d.             Use precise words and phrases, telling details, and sensory language to
convey a vivid picture of the experiences, events, setting, and/or characters.
 e.              Provide a conclusion that follows from and reflects on what is experienced,
observed, or resolved over the course of the narrative.
                                                         

             Writing from your own experience is a great way to express new ideas.  This allows you to begin from a solid foundation.  This can act as a bridge toward bringing a character to life.  Drawing from previous experiences can also allow you to give a setting a realistic feel because by using these experiences, small but critical details can be remembered.  However, when you do this, you need to be sure not to reflect any biases.
             Sometimes writing from experience can be a negative thing.  This is because you may have had a bad experience which could lead you to phrase things in an ambigious or negative manner despite your best efforts.  One thing I would suggest would be to read a book similar to what you want to write.  This can give you an idea of how the story should flow.
             Whatever you do do not get discouraged. Like Robert Heinlein said, "Write, Write, write, until you cannot anymore and then write some more. It is only by constantly writing that you grow comfortable doing so."
 

Computers and the third world classroom

O'Donnel, M. (2015, April 22). Camara Education. Retrieved April 27, 2015, from https://www.facebook.com/CamaraEducate?fref=photo  
                                             Click here to go to page.

                                                   ISBE Standard 6
Use technology, including the Internet, to produce, publish, and update
individual or shared writing products in response to ongoing feedback,
including new arguments or information. 
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         The above is the Facebook page of a group of dedicated volunteers that have made it their goal to bring computers and technology to third world classrooms.  My attention was drawn to this by Sr. Fausta.  While we were working on a project for this class, she remarked that there was only one computer in her school.  She then proceeded to show me a typical Tanzanian classroom.  I was aware that most of Africa was a third world country, but had no real idea of what this entailed.  The classes she showed me were very spartan and primitive to my eyes. 

        The classroom in some cases were out doors and the students sat on the ground while the educator stood by writing on a handheld chalkboard.  Sister went on to show me that The government did have a tech program in place.  Then she told me that in many cases the educator, having very limited access to even the simplest materials, would often have to draw pictures of computers and the various parts.  The students all seemed to be in a state of disbelief that such things were real.  
        Having been so blessed by all that we have here in the states, can we not donate even the most basic computers to help these students into the modern educational system?